My Acrostic Poem
Hi, my name is Hafiz. I am new to the Allstars.
A few weeks ago, our class wrote acrostic poems about our country. Here is mine.
Sudan has a lot wars
Uses torches to see at night
Day time is very hot
And all males do work
Never eats dogs
Hope you like it.
May 5th, 2008 at 8:06 pm
funky blog and keep it up hafiz and congragulations on your blog and its fresh as in cool!!!
May 22nd, 2008 at 7:14 pm
Hi, Hafiz
I feel so sad for Sudan.
I always watch the fights on lebanese TV.
P.s I hope to read more on your blog.
Bye, Bye
Lilly
May 28th, 2008 at 3:40 pm
Hi Hafiz,
your acrostic poem was very interesting
and I especially liked the one where
you said you need to use torches at night.
I will be looking forward to looking at new posts!!!!!!!!
June 6th, 2008 at 3:58 pm
Hello Hafiz!
Welcome to the blogosphere! I hope you enjoy it.
What do you think about blogging? Do you like it?
Ramiz
June 10th, 2008 at 10:00 pm
Hi Hafiz!
I agree with Lilly!
And good luck with you blog!!
P.s Bye
June 13th, 2008 at 3:20 pm
Hi hafiz.
Good poem it’s creative very creative.
Good job. Great job.
How do you think you went in the zone cross country?
June 17th, 2008 at 8:20 pm
Hi,
Lilly is right when ever my parents are watching lebanese tv to see if anything happened in lebanon because my mums parents live there they always see things a bout bombings on sudan.Also like ramiz said are you enjoying having a blog. You can get back to me by clicking my name ontop of this comment.
Hope to talk to you later! Tooooooooooooooooooooooodles
July 10th, 2008 at 2:36 pm
Hey Hafiz,
its me Katherine! I never knew that and it sounds like its dangerous there to but hope to see more on your blog and keep it up mate!!!!
Katherine
August 12th, 2008 at 8:49 pm
Hey Hafiz whats up,
Oh and the nick name that you gave me can you stop calling me that at schhol please!!! 
Just to tell you that Sudan is kind of hot because my aunty went there and she said there were great things too.
By the way you haven’t been posting much are you busy or something but any way write more posts!!!
See you at school!!!
August 20th, 2008 at 3:56 pm
Hi,Katherine how you going good what ever you called me am great with it any way ,
what you said to me because you my friend and i help you enjoying the blogging.
August 21st, 2008 at 7:38 pm
Hi Fizzle,
Sudan seems so interesting! I think that you have done well to describe it well! I think you should put up a new post about the olympics!
Naomi
September 11th, 2008 at 8:03 am
Hi Hafiz
I liked your acrostic poem alot it was
cool especially the part when you wrote
at the end hope like it!!!
September 21st, 2008 at 9:52 am
Hello! Good poem! Good job! Also wonderful description! bye
September 22nd, 2008 at 3:52 pm
hi lilly. how are you what you been doing at Melbourne?
we miss you any way bye bye
September 25th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
Hey Hafiz,
I like Sudan, but I wouldnt like to go there….
Would you like to go there
Do you have Lebanese Tv in your house?
Have you been to Sudan?
Hope to see more posts in the future
P.S I like your theme.
Bye,Bye
Lilly
October 12th, 2008 at 4:55 pm
Hi, Hafiz
Melbourne is going great, but I liked Sydney more. (and im not just saying that)
Everything in Melbourne is so slow and more relaxed which I dont really like.
How is all the Allstars and you
How has your holidays been?
If you see Ari or Sylvia or Queenie in the bus, please tell them Lilly said hi and that I really miss them all.
Hope to see more blog posts in the future in the future
Bye,bye
Lilly
October 16th, 2008 at 10:09 am
Hi Lilly,
thank you for commenting.
say hi to Ari, Sylvia and Queene.
I will tell them lilly is going to miss you.
Cheers Hafiz